Wow, it's a great story that shows us, how a simple idea can become a great bussines.She is a person who could see a thing that other couldn't and use her own resoucers to make it, I feel happy when I hear about people like Ashley, because It's inspiring to know that other people are making incredible things with just a few, and in a way that many can consider ridiculous, but I belive that there is exactly their secret for the succsess, do somenthing that others consider ridiculous and do somenthing that others can't imagine.
Ashley trusted in herself and in her bussines and it makes her deserving of all the succces.
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I thought you would find the story inspiring!
story that show - Story is 3rd person singular, so you need the verb shows.
become in a greatest bussines - become a great (or very great) business. Or, you could use the instead of a before a superlative.
could saw - Always use the simple form of the verb with modals. The simple form is the infinitive without "to."
resousers - resources
hacer = both "to do" and "to make" It's tricky to know when to use do or make. I'll try to thinkk of a good way to explain it!
is inspiring - Remember that every verb in English has to have a subject expressed. It's inspiring
makes her, deserver - makes her deserving
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